AS idioms in haiku

[heyduke]

ok, i'm going to re-post this one with a title, foto and a few commas, beause i don't think anyone got it. or maybe it's just bad haiku.

thirty-six cent bar tool

dime, dot ought five ought
penny, point ought five eight
quarter, oh six three.

 

[Derf]

ok, i'm going to re-post this one with a title, foto and a few commas, beause i don't think anyone got it. or maybe it's just bad haiku.

thirty-six cent bar tool

dime, dot ought five ought
penny, point ought five eight
quarter, oh six three.

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Now that I get that I like it even more.


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[heyduke]

carburetor work,
metering valve, tiny spring,
ping! lost forever.

 

[HuskStihl]

Changing the sprocket
C-clip launched into orbit
Done for the morning

 

[Philbert]

Wood for the Dodgegeeks
Fill the shed before winter
Watch out for the bees

Philbert

 

[roosterhog]

Summer saw repair
Too freakin' hot to crank 'em
Why do I do this?

 

[Chris-PA]

It's raining again
I've sharpened all the saw chains
Should I port another?

 

[jmssaws]

Hey! Look at me now.
Cut down tree all by myself.
Still alive to poast.

The force is strong in u young skywalker!

 

[Mandres]

Back in the old days
Agonizing push-pull work
Nowadays, good fun

 

[NWCoaster]

Stihl three sixty two!
In wood twenty five inches --
One awesome chainsaw.

OK, Haiku is too easy.....how bout some Iambic Pentameter.... you know .... grown up level stuff.......

 

[Philbert]

.. you know .... grown up level stuff.......

Wouldn't apply here.

Philbert

 

[NWCoaster]

Wouldn't apply here.

Philbert

Oh $hiP!! Lol.

 

[heyduke]

OK, Haiku is too easy.....how bout some Iambic Pentameter.... you know .... grown up level stuff.......

simple verse, a must
like saws, easy to repair.
two good things i want.