Please don't think I am a wienie but I would like to offer you some tips on strategic grammar that can help grab the customer in the short time you have to get their attention.
Always write with the "Active voice" Not "Passive voice."
Here is an example
"In the business since 1991 giving us the experience and equipment to handle any job."
Rewrite this sentence to read something like..."We are Cincinnati's premiere Tree service since 1991. We have the experience and Equipment to handle any job."
This is similar to saying..."I drive the car." (Active voice) instead of "The car was driven by me." (Passive)
In the active voice, you are the subject...the thing that is important to the customer. In the passive voice, the car is the subject, which is not what you want to communicate.
Try to distinguish each claim you make on the first page with a bullet point. That will draw the readers attention.
Also, its "workers compensation" not workmans.
I like the colors and your font. Also your credentials on the first page, BBB, show that you ain't some business with magnetic signs on your truck doors!
Good luck.